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American McGee’s Alice Poem
Entitled “Cheshire Cat”
By Seth Vandenburg

Wonderland’s mysterious grinning feline
His riddles, ever so divine
But on first sight to Alice
Who before, her heart never had malice
The cat was as strange as all the signs

As of now, the Cheshire Cat has changed
His fur, his riddles, all of him rearranged
Body a skeleton-form, a ring in his ear
And his grin was much worse to fear
His teeth, completely fanged

His sudden transformation, so very uncouth
All of him changed, body to tooth
No normal man would dare to delve
To fight the Cheshire Cat’s corrupted shell
Though Alice was calm, to tell the truth

They both journeyed together through Wonderland
Through treacherous hordes of enemies, band by band
The Red Queen’s domain, they soon appear
The end game forever near
Though sadly, the Cheshire Cat met his end by the Red Queen’s hand
My second AMA poem, this one about the Cheshire Cat.

Comment when you fave please.
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Aww.... poor Cheshire Cat gets killed. Well, he was adorable while he lasted :D
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Drakoani Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
i really like it its written very well
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Drakoani Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2009
i really like it its written very well
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LittleFortuneCookie Featured By Owner May 23, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
Oh what a divine little poem you have here, it's wonderful to read out loud, the stanzas are of perfect length *nodnod*
*favs*
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blood100101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
what is the systm for the game? also i love the poem. and i hate how the kitty dies T.T
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008  Student Writer
PC.
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blood100101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you thank you thank you
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Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2008
*crys* i didnt know he was gonna die......now i dont want to finish the game!!!!!! but i cant stop playing it fun
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008  Student Writer
Guess American McGee wants to put people in suspense.
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Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
Yep
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008  Student Writer
Just wait. When the movie comes, the Cheshire Cat might have a scarier death.
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Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008
O.o *crys* noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cheshire kitty
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:iconslyboyseth:
slyboyseth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2008  Student Writer
Maybe I shouldn't have said that... (sweatdrop)
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Deadlysunshine Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2008
okay now im fine
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2008  Student Writer
Good. (awkward silence follows)
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virenity Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008
Dude. [link]
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2008  Student Writer
Potato potaato.
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Morty340 Featured By Owner May 27, 2008
Another great poem!
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner May 27, 2008  Student Writer
Thanks. I guess I should do more. Probably one of American McGee's Grimm, coming in July.
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KingdomHeartsTWT Featured By Owner May 27, 2008   Photographer
This is another piece of poetry! You're good! :D
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zenotheshademaster Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Nice one man!
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NoLimit5 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
You\'re pretty damn good at this! Now if only you didn\'t do your stories in script format...:XD:
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Student Writer
Eh, I\'m thinking of doing some without the script format thing. Perhaps a parody of Kingdom Hearts?
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NoLimit5 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Eh, do whatever you like.
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Student Writer
(shrugs) I guess I could do a poem based on my newest found anime love.
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Papa-T-41 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Heh, wow, that\'s awesome!
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Student Writer
Why thank you! Maybe I should do more of these?
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Papa-T-41 Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Well, if you feel like you can do more, absolutely :D
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slyboyseth Featured By Owner May 26, 2008  Student Writer
I guess it all depends on who it should be. Think I could do one of Grimm?
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